Posting 1
The introduction is not clear. The introduction should include definition of spiritual assessment. For example, Spiritual assessments are measures used to determine the needs of the patient. Spiritual perspective does not involve nourishing ones spirit. It should talk about assessing the needs of the patient. There is no clear definition on occupational information and how it is used. For example, occupation information is used together with cognitive information processing to determine whether some one is ready to take up a job. Occupation information provides information about ones career life. The explanation should include how the concept is used. Cognitive information processing is used to manage and assess the performance of students so as to improve it. The explanation should show how cognitive information processing is linked with occupational information.
The thesis statement is not supported well. The essay should explain how the three perspectives are used and related. For example, it should explain how the spiritual perspective is related to cognitive information processing and occupational information. In addition, one should illustrate how they are used.
Posting 2
The definition for spiritual assessment is clear as spiritual assessment helps determine the spiritual needs of the patient. The essay has explained how spiritual assessment is used in health care. For example, spiritual assessment helps health care professionals identify the psychological and spiritual problems of the client. The knowledge domain is explained well, but it should include more examples to show how it is used.
The concepts should have a clear definition and how they are applied. It should be defined using questions. For example, in the decision-making skills domain you have not defined the concept and shown it is used. You have given questions like “What are the steps in choosing an occupation, program of study, or job that will meet my needs?”
Also, the essay should be organized well.
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